I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~

Alya

Chapter I:And so it begins

This story will be a little weird and if you want a natural shaman king fic read the other one I will start soon, but now I am kind of getting bored so Im writing this because it will be funny and Ive always wondered what I would do and how will I act if I wouldve been in the shaman king anime, participating in the tournament.

You are a 14 year old girl named Amaya ( night rain ). You have long dark hair and aquamarine eyes. You are a happy joyful person, very calm and hard-working, You love anime especially Shaman King. Yes you are in the real world, The only difference is that everyone can see ghosts. One of your best friends is a ghost, Aki ( autumn -). Your other best friend is Moriko ( forest child ). She has pink eyes and brown hair. She loves anime too and also has a ghost friend Hotaru. Your brothers name is Masaya and he is a little freaked out by your ghost friends, but le loves watching Shaman King. Today you are receiving the second part of the anime when you arrive from school ( from the episode with Basil to the end. ) and you are very excited. You cant wait to see the DVD together with Masaya and Moriko.

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school finished and you were walking together with Moriko towards your house.
( U ) I cant wait to see what happens next.
( Moriko ) Tell me about it. It ended exactly when Zeke send Basil to attack Yoh and the gang.
( U ) Lets hurry up to see what happens.
At your house
( U ) Masaya did the DVD arrive?
( Masaya ) Yes, a couple of minutes ago. I waited for u 2 so we can watch it together.
( U ) COOL! Lets watch it!
You started watching the DVD and you saw about half of it. It was a scene where Zeke was watching Yoh train. Suddenly Moriko said:
( Moriko ) You know Zeke it quite cute when he doesnt do the All humans must die thing.
( U ) WHAT??? He is a crazy lunatic who wants to destroy the world!
Suddenly Zeke turned towards YOU!

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He said:
( Zeke ) So I am a lunatic. Then lets have some fun. Suddenly a bright light appeared and you and Masaya and Moriko were sucked into the T.V. The only thing you had in your hands were your laptop and your PJs because after the finish of the show you and your friends were going to bed. Together with you were sucked it the TV some clothes. You started yelling at Zeke:
( U ) Zeke I am soooo going to kill you. WTH are you taking us?
( Zeke ) U should know!
You closed your eyes waiting for everything to end .

And now the pics:

You: I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~ I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~

I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~ I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~

Aki:

Masaya:

Moriko:

Hotaru:

Chapter II: Damn u Zeke and meeting the characters?

You closed your eyes hoping everything will end soon. When you opened them you were frozen. You knew that place, it was Japan, the country, were you were born before moving to china. You knew that could mean only one thing
( Masaya ) Sis are we were I think I am?
( U ) I think so bro!
( Moriko ) You mean we are
( U ) Yes we are in Japan in the shaman world. Wait a second! Moriko do you still have the mortuary tablet with you.
( Moriko ) Yes I have it. I took Hotaru with me at school. But why?
( U ) If we are in the shamanic world and we can see ghost that can mean that we could be shamans. You took your mortuary tablet from your backpack and took out Aki.
( U ) Aki please wake up.
( Aki ) What do you want?
( U ) I umm was wondering if you would want to be my guardian spirit since Zeke brought us here from our world.
( Aki ) Sure!
( Hotaru ) Same for me!
( Masaya ) Not fair! I dont have a guardian ghost.
( U ) Well u can search for one at the cemetery from here. I wonder what period is now.
( ??? ) It is too late for you to join the tournament, but you could join me and help me destroy all humans.
( U ) GRRR! Show yourself Zeke so I can punch your ugly face for bringing us here!
( Zeke ) Cant do that! My brother is coming and I dont want him to see me now.
You looked towards Monument Hill and you saw four guys coming towards you. You knew exactly who they were.
( Moriko ) Is that?
( U ) Yes it is!
( Masaya ) Holy God! I am so going to kill Zeke for this! WTH did he bring us here in the first place?
The five boys were approaching you and they saw Aki and Hotaru.

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( Yoh ) Hey are you guys shamans?
( U ) Yea but we just found guardian spirits.
( Moriko ) And I think its a little late to join the tournament!
( U ) Who are you guys anyway? ( me: You had to lie. How could you tell them that in your world they are anime characters? )
( Yoh ) I am Yoh and this are Trey, Len and Morty. Oh and Amidamaru, Corey, Bason and Tokageroh.
( U ) Hi! I am Amaya, this is my brother Masaya and my friend Moriko. And Aki and Hotaru. Nice to meet you all!
( Yoh ) Do you have were to stay?
( U ) Well no we just arrived here from China!
( Morty ) Do you want to stay with us?
( Masaya & Moriko ) Sure! Why not?
( U * whisper so just Moriko can hear ) Because of Anna!
( Len ) Well lets go today or Anna will start yelling at us again!
You went towards Yohs place. When you arrived you had a shock. IT WAS HUGE! Even bigger than in was in the anime! You heard yelling and you were able to see Anna yelling at a scared Rio.

Chapter III: The dream

So I left you at the door. You walked in at Anna came at you.
( Anna ) Who are you?
( U ) My name is Amaya, this is my brother Masaya and my friend Moriko. Yoh told us we could stay here but if you dont want to we could leave.
( Anna ) Are you a shaman?
( U ) Yes I am. This is Aki and this is Hotaru, Morikos spirit. We just found our spirits.
( Anna ) You can stay, but you will have to train and do chores.
( U ) We will. Thank you.
( Masaya ) But how can I find a guardian spirit.
( U ) We will go to the cemetery tomorrow.
( Masaya ) But
( U ) No buts and you will have to train again.
( Masaya ) WHAT? The competition is next year. Its not fair.
( U ) If you want to have a chance at it you have to train.
( Yoh ) What competition?
( Moriko ) Its a karate competition and Masaya and Amaya will participate next year. Its on pairs. I want to participate as well but I cant because I dont have anyone to pair up with.
( U ) The competition is next year. Until then you will find someone.
( Anna ) Tam come here!
A pink haired girl came in the room. She looked scared at everyone.
( U ) Hi! Im Amaya
( Moriko ) And Im Morioko
( Masaya ) And Im Masaya.
( Tam ) Hi Im Tammy!
( Yoh ) Come one guys Ill show you to your rooms.
You all followed Yoh to your rooms. Masaya shared the room with Trey and you and Moriko shared a room. You both went to sleep thinking how you could get home sooner.

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~ Dream ~ You were walking trough darkness. You werent able to see a thing. You were scared because you hated the dark since you fell into a deep hole at the cemetery when you were 5 years old. Thats how you met Aki. She helped you out and you remained friends, but still the darkness scared you. You had a small idea who brought you here.
( U ) I hate the dark! I hate the dark! I hate the dark! I hate the dark!
( ??? ) OK,OK! I GOT THE MESSAGE!
( U ) What do you want Zeke? Why did you bring us here? I know because of you I have this dream!
( zeke ) Smart girl! 1) I want you and your friend to join me.
2) I brought you here for fun and I left a message for your parents that u went camping so they wont worry about you.
( U ) YOU WHAT! My parents know I dont go camping because I am scared of the dark.
( Zeke ) Why are you scared of the dark?
( U ) Because when I was 5 I fell into a hole at the cemetery and I was surrounded by mad ghosts for 3 hours. So now I will have to wait for one of my friends to win the tournament so I can go home?
( Zeke ) But none of them will win.
( U ) Oh yes they will. I will take care of that.
( Zeke ) I dont want to argue with you and its getting late. See you soon Amaya.
( U ) You are such an idiot Zeke!
You woke up and saw it was still dark outside. You got off your bed and went on the roof to watch the stars which were shining very bright that night. You couldnt believe how beautiful they were. It was like the stars were the only place where evil and darkness can not reach, the place where light will always exist. For you the stars were the sign of hope and happiness. As you were thinking at this suddenly a black shadow covered the sky and you saw ...
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~ In the darkness of a cruel world the flame of hope burns for those who believe~

I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~ I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~

Alya · Trimis: 05/12/2006 12:09 Titlul subiectului: ....

Vad k nimeni n-a zis nimic de fic-ul asta why? PLsssssss comentati dak vreti criticati fiecare cuvant da makr sa stiu si eu va place nu va place trebuie sa corectez ceva nu trebuie sa corectez...

Chapter IV: A new friend and a guardian ghost

So I left you on the roof. A black shadow covered the sky and you werent able to see the stars anymore. In front of you, you saw a tall red haired girl crying. She was a ghost but she seemed really upset about something.
( U ) Hey what happened? Why are you crying?
( Ghost ) I am all alone and n-n-nobody l-l-likes m-me. And m-my l-little s-sister. I-I h-havent s-seen h-her for s-so l-long. I-I miss h-her s-so much. I dont have any friends.
( U ) I can be your friend if you want me to.
( Ghost ) Really?
( U ) ^____^ Yea sure. What is your name?
( Ghost ) My name is Soraya.
( U ) Hello Soraya my name is Amaya. Where is your sister?
( Soraya ) I really dont know.
( U ) But what is her name?
( Soraya ) Aki!
( U ) AKI?
( Aki ) You called me Amaya?
( Soraya ) Aki?
( Aki ) Soraya?
( Soraya ) OMG my little sister! I havent seen you for so long. They hugged each other and cried because of the joy. You were so happy to see them both happy. It made your heart be full of joy.
( Soraya ) How can I ever thank you for reuniting me with my sister.
( U ) I am happy that you both are happy but now that you mention it my brother needs a guardian ghost. Do you want to be his spirit ally?
( Sora ) Sure!
( U ) GREAT!

Chapter V: You were walking down the streets trying to find an ice-cream shop. BUT YOU COULDNT! IT WAS WAY TOOOO HOT AND YOU WERE THE ONLY LUNATIC ON THE STREETS!

~ Flashback hour earlier ~
( U ) Come on lets go and buy some ice-cream?
( Masaya ) Are you nuts its 40 degree Celsius out there you must be nuts to step out of the house.
( Moriko ) Hes right!
( U ) But if we buy ice-cream it will do good on that heat.
( Masaya ) First you have to get alive to an ice-cream shop!
( U ) Fine if you dont wanna go I will go alone.

~ End of Flashback ~
( U ) Damn they were right!
( ??? ) Prepare yourself!
( U ) Silva I am really pissed off what do you want!
( Silva ) * anime fall * You are annoying with this.
( U ) So what?
( Silva ) Well ok the shaman council decided to give you a chance to enter the tournament since Zeke already dragged you here. You have to defeat me in 15 minutes.
( U ) I have more time than Yoh.
( Silva ) Yea but you have to leave me without furyoku!
( U ) Sure! Aki in the electric guitar! ( QT: What? me: Oh yea I forget to tell you that trough your laptop you can bring things from home and you brought your electric guitar, Masaya his ninja sword and Moriko a bo so you can fight )
( Silva ) Since Trey with the snowboard I have never seen a weirder oversoul.
( U ) Hehehe I like music a lot. So prepare yourself Silva. Shock wave.
( Silva ) Totem Blast.
Yada yada yada you fight and eventually you win after 12 minutes and you get a ice blue oracle bell.
( Silva ) You are already in the second round so good luck. You will have to leavet to Doby Village soon.
( U ) Thanks. Bye Silva!

~ Fast Foreword to the inn ~
( U ) Hey guys guess what!
( Masaya ) You won an oracle bell!
( Moriko ) Ye so did we.
( U ) We will have to leave soon. Wait a sec I FORGOT ABOUT MY Ice- CREAM!!!!
( Yoh & guys ) * coming back from training * Hey we brought some ice-cream.
( U ) * happy dance *
( Masaya ) Looks like you have luck!
( U ) Yep!

Chapter VI:

You woke up with the loud BEEEP BEEEEP BEEEEP of your alarm clock. You opened your eyes and understood what day that was. You woke up Moriko and went down stairs. You saw the guys eating.
( U ) Umm we have to tell you something before we leave to Doby Village.
( Yoh ) What?
( U ) Mariko!
( Mariko ) Why me? Fine! Ok we arent from this world!
( Guys ) Yea right!
( U ) Trey in three seconds Anna is gonna slap you.
( Mariko ) Three two one
( Anna ) Trey you drank my tea again!!!!!!!! * slapping Trey *
( Guys ) o_O.
( Masaya ) We come from another world where there is this anime called shaman king and it is about your adventures.
( Mariko ) And Yoh is main character.
( U ) Because everything started with him.
( Masaya ) And many girls in our world watch it and their absolutely insane after Yoh or Trey or even Len.
( U ) And theres and idiot jerk named Zeke who brought us her and they even like him.
( Yoh ) So how does it end?
( U ) We dont know,
( Mariko ) We havent seen all the episodes cause Zeke brought us here.
( Guys ) So how do we arrive to Doby village?
( U ) We cant tell you otherwise we can destroy all the world.
( Yoh )Ok then! SO we should get going.

~ After 10 minutes ~ At the airport ~
( Rio ) Wow! What a huge plain!
( Len ) My family has 50 more!
( U ) Three two one SHUT UP ZEKE!!!
( Guys ) O_o
( Masaya and Moriko ) * giggle *
( Zeke ) * sweatdrop * You ruin all my fun!
( U ) Thats a good thing for me! Are you going to say all your Im gonna make a world full of shaman speech or must I say it for you?
( Zeke ) Go ahead!
( U ) This idiot right here is a jerk with an ego bigger than the house or even his spirit who pretends to be the strongest shaman alive
( Zeke ) I am!
( U ) * anger vein * Dont interrupt me! As I said he is an idiot who wants to make a world full of shamans and destroy all humans. Have I missed anything?
( Zeke ) NO!
( U ) Oh yea and I forgot! * moving towards Zeke and punching him in the face * THAT S FOR BRINGING ME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!
( Zeke ) A little moody today are we?
( U ) You can bet on that!
( Zeke ) Well see you later and Yoh
( U ) Yoh what he wants to say is that he needs you stronger.
( Yoh ) Why?
( U ) Dont ask!
( Zeke ) I hate you!
( U ) Same here!
And with that he left and you were jumping up and down singing HE LEFT, HE LEFT, HE LEFT
( Guys ) ?_________?
( Mariko and Masaya ) Dont ask!
( Guys ) -_-
( U ) ^_^!
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~ In the darkness of a cruel world the flame of hope burns for those who believe~

I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~ I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~

Autumn Shadow · Trimis: 23/12/2006 23:28 Titlul subiectului: U go, girl!!!

*Wheuh*...
Am terminat in sfarsit de citit... What can I say...critici nu am, e super-tare... super-amuzanta si vreau continuarea cat mai repede... (daca nu uit ca e Craciunul si vin sa te pap!*muahahahaha*)

Imi place foarte mult... Povestea ta a reusit sa ma faca sa rad chiar si dupa o zi mega lunga ... si super proasta... :whistle:

Aaa... I'm just another one those girls wich are nuts about Zeke ... :-D

CONTINUAAA!!!
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I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~ I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~

Alya · Trimis: 25/12/2006 01:18 Titlul subiectului: Thanks

Thanks Autumn Shadow and because you are one of those girls who are nuts about Zeke let me tell yuo something ... la sf or sa fie impreuna Ayame si Zeke da mai e muuuuuuuuuuuuuult pan atunci
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~ In the darkness of a cruel world the flame of hope burns for those who believe~

I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~ I cant believe this! ~ Shaman king ~